
10/31/2009 c1
9PoorEnglishArtist
I like this! It's actually shockingly similar to my own story Hush!
Based on this first chapter, I'm not too fond of her character, she seems a little mean. But I'm sure that it (my opinion) will change. She has a funny without-being-random thought process, which I like. I would have thought that she'd at least miss being able to talk a little...meh, ignore that.
On to the next chapter!

I like this! It's actually shockingly similar to my own story Hush!
Based on this first chapter, I'm not too fond of her character, she seems a little mean. But I'm sure that it (my opinion) will change. She has a funny without-being-random thought process, which I like. I would have thought that she'd at least miss being able to talk a little...meh, ignore that.
On to the next chapter!
6/10/2008 c2
24fairies and snapple
I'm not sure if you're still writing this, but I hope you are, because it's totally hilarious... please update! I love the protagonist, she's so funny and real... and I hope that eventually (even if it takes 30 chapters) she'll talk.

I'm not sure if you're still writing this, but I hope you are, because it's totally hilarious... please update! I love the protagonist, she's so funny and real... and I hope that eventually (even if it takes 30 chapters) she'll talk.
11/21/2007 c2
12elisefey
Nice job setting up the Rossis. Obviously, this will not be the last she sees of them. I'm interested to see what happens next!

Nice job setting up the Rossis. Obviously, this will not be the last she sees of them. I'm interested to see what happens next!
8/8/2007 c2 your harbor
This is really, really good so far and I'm really enjoying it. Great job! I must add it to my favorites and maybe even check out some more stories of yours.
This is really, really good so far and I'm really enjoying it. Great job! I must add it to my favorites and maybe even check out some more stories of yours.
8/1/2007 c2
1inked out
alrighty, i'm in mad love with this story and it's only two chapters in. generally, it takes a couple more chapters to hook me but you got me hooked by the first one. lovely story! i'll be sure to keep reading!

alrighty, i'm in mad love with this story and it's only two chapters in. generally, it takes a couple more chapters to hook me but you got me hooked by the first one. lovely story! i'll be sure to keep reading!
7/17/2007 c2 kiki
oh! the case of mondays! Also it's interesting for people to confess all their secrets to you if they think that you are mute! hehe!
oh! the case of mondays! Also it's interesting for people to confess all their secrets to you if they think that you are mute! hehe!
7/17/2007 c2
21insane in the brain
Ugh.
I hate Mondays.
Nice contradiction to the end of the previous chapter ending... xD

Ugh.
I hate Mondays.
Nice contradiction to the end of the previous chapter ending... xD
7/17/2007 c1 insane in the brain
It was only ten o’clock in the morning and I’d already completely fucked with someone’s head. - Love this line xD
It was only ten o’clock in the morning and I’d already completely fucked with someone’s head. - Love this line xD
7/17/2007 c2 Lyssa
o i need another chapter, these are so classic i love em!
Keep up the really (really!) good story/s (ive only read this one)
:)
o i need another chapter, these are so classic i love em!
Keep up the really (really!) good story/s (ive only read this one)
:)
7/16/2007 c2
1eliza-smiles
i really enjoy reading this, i think you capture all the facial expressions well, especially in the previous chapter. hehehe i tried to take a vow of silence but 4 hours into it i skinned my fingers so it didnt happen... great work and i cannot wait to read the next chapter. cheers, eliza

i really enjoy reading this, i think you capture all the facial expressions well, especially in the previous chapter. hehehe i tried to take a vow of silence but 4 hours into it i skinned my fingers so it didnt happen... great work and i cannot wait to read the next chapter. cheers, eliza
7/16/2007 c2 Delilah in NYC
Yes, a little short, but still good. And funny. Funny good.
I've seen both Office Space and Anchorman. Loved'em both. I think you're a girl after my own heart.
Keep on updating!
Yes, a little short, but still good. And funny. Funny good.
I've seen both Office Space and Anchorman. Loved'em both. I think you're a girl after my own heart.
Keep on updating!