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9/25/2006 c1 16spiffy-sophia
Nice! I loved the description of the doll. And you did a good job of capturing a child's perspective without changing your writing style (at least as far as I can tell, not knowing much about your style).
9/10/2006 c1 kmuntz
This was good, but not as good as the last one I read. The writing was just a little choppy, but the plot itself was very interesting.
9/6/2006 c1 Sundown too lazy to log in
beautiful. I absolutely adore Vencie, and reading this just brought back a tidal wave of memories. Thank you for writing this excellent piece. Well done!
9/4/2006 c1 Lyn
This is a beautiful piece. Loved your descriptions. It left me wanting more. For instance: why did the father think that little girls shouldn't play with dolls?

And for some reason, it left me a little sad. Great work.
9/3/2006 c1 25Lavender341
I like this. It's short and sweet, but I feel as if this happened to me.

Keep writing!


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