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10/27/2006 c1 17Cum grano saltis
wow, this one is really awesome.

very expressiv and sad.

great work!
10/21/2006 c1 pure grace
Jeez... that's intense. Especially toward the end (the "mask of blasphemy" bit - which, by the way, is a really excellent phrase. I bow down to your superior artifice), it reminded me a bit of Phantom (of the Opera, and more the book Phantom, based on it, and more still of a fanfic based off that) - something Christine might have said or felt after having her illusion of the "angel of music" shattered. It's a really powerful peace; it embodies complete love and utter despair. That's difficult, and you don't come off remotely precocious writing about it. 's a matter of fact, when I first read you, I thought you were much older. Kudos to you for being amazing and talented.
9/4/2006 c1 23Jahonay
Great poem. That's awesome!
9/4/2006 c1 14moonsliver86
Powerful Poem. This could make a good song. The repetitions intensified the intensity of this poem greatly. The pacing of the poem, the way the words were strung together was "wow"... I was reading out loud in my mind and my mind was racing... it's depressing though but who cares, good job! keep it up!

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