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12/5/2007 c1 outsidersgirl
this is good
7/29/2007 c1 6MelGrl
You did fairly well at discribing the story. Please update soon.
3/26/2007 c1 3Simfreak111
it seemed that you kind of jumped into everything a little fast. you should have slowed it down a little and put in more sensory details. it was pretty good overall though.
10/29/2006 c1 25V de V
You seem to favor participial phrases. But do not over use them. It gets very grating on the nerves. Nice story though.
9/30/2006 c1 14CK Shorty
I can kinda relate to Lex. I loved the first chapter, it was really well-written. Can't wait to read more of it :o)
9/16/2006 c1 JJ
Gosh ! I LOVE THIS STORY, and the plot is such a great idea =) youre Great at descibing everything, Great Job
9/8/2006 c1 1worstwriteronfic
Great Story.. I love how you described everything..
9/5/2006 c1 1Remy418
i really love it. keep on at it
9/5/2006 c1 gulhawk02
I like this story idea; very great chapter. I can't wait to read the rest.
9/5/2006 c1 omaterluna
that is so upsetting that they cant see eachother as much...anyways really good chapter cant wait for the rest xD
9/5/2006 c1 10waly913
i actually really like this story, more than just having sexual content, it really has a strong story line starting. i can kinda understand it alot as well...most women seem to be like that...well, not most i guess...i had a few liek that though!anyway, nice start i like itPEACE

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