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9/10/2006 c1 kmuntz
This was very good- haunting, confusing, touching. I especially like the plot twist(s). The writing was very good, though I'm not the biggest fan of the minimalized style you used here. I could see everytihng happening, and I especially like the idea, though I'm still ont sure what exactly happened, even after two reads. Great story.
9/5/2006 c1 17Laisse Beton
This is . . . tantalizing. Is that the right word? Maybe not, because it's finished, but that's the point, yes? Short stories and vignettes kill me because they sneak right up on you with the truth. Very nice, anyway, is the point I was getting at. Looking forward to reading more of your writing.

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