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9/5/2006 c1 30Morbid Thief
I enjoyed its simplicity, but at the same time the vagueness of detail left me somewhat confused. Just a little more detail would make it better in my eyes. But that is really all opinion. Poetry like this could often be preferred to those with a lot of detail such as mine. I believe that this is your style. So, I just made a suggestion. I'm no professional.
9/4/2006 c1 15E. Goldstein
in the second line, i think you meant to say "commands".

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