for 100 Pink Felt Hearts9/13/2006 c1 frayedlifeforce
i really like the chorus and the first verse starting with 'speeding cars' - well i really liked that because...i don't know - it sounded like a song, you know?and the part with major key - i liked that part too!i dont have the tune in my head for this, so it doesn't flow as well as the liquid sunshine one, but its still great
i really like the chorus and the first verse starting with 'speeding cars' - well i really liked that because...i don't know - it sounded like a song, you know?and the part with major key - i liked that part too!i dont have the tune in my head for this, so it doesn't flow as well as the liquid sunshine one, but its still great
9/11/2006 c1 bread and circuses
i really love this. the first verse is so awesome. it's so sad, too. great song.
i really love this. the first verse is so awesome. it's so sad, too. great song.
9/5/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
This was really good and it would make a great song. I especially liked the line, "Washing away the dew drops which thought that they were king." Great work and definately keep writing.
This was really good and it would make a great song. I especially liked the line, "Washing away the dew drops which thought that they were king." Great work and definately keep writing.