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1/23/2007 c1 tesa131313
Rhythm good. Sweet poem. Luffs it
9/19/2006 c1 an old friend
i like it. it flows nicely
9/17/2006 c1 26Dragonslostchild
Aww! That's so true, and I wish a lot of people would read this poem and take it to heart. Too many people worry about superficial desires more than the troubles of others, and though I like to think I'm better I guess I'm really not. You know, I go out and buy that new Full Metal Alchemist DVD or a bunch of clothes I don't really need instead of doing something useful with the money. Not that one should live a joyless life for the sake of others, but they should at least stop to think. Oh well, this was a huge review so I'll stop here, but suffice it to say that despite its simplicity I think this might be my favorite one of your poems.

Brimstone
9/9/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Sweet piece, I like it lots! Keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^

P.S - I posted a new poem. ^_^

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