for Evil9/30/2006 c1 
8Amerie Marque
-doeshappydance-
Happy happy happy.
Happy stuff.
You're supposed to write happy stuff darling.
But it was good regardless of the whole depressing and angst thing.
BE HAPPY DAMMIT!
8Amerie Marque-doeshappydance-
Happy happy happy.
Happy stuff.
You're supposed to write happy stuff darling.
But it was good regardless of the whole depressing and angst thing.
BE HAPPY DAMMIT!
9/30/2006 c1 insanitystrikesthrice
Well, I liked it. You write good poems.
Sorry, I couldn't write a huge review on a poem- seems more like a story thing. The next chapter of GDM, you'll get one, k?
As for what to update next, just go with your instincts. Whatever you have ideas for, that should be first on the update list.
Well, I liked it. You write good poems.
Sorry, I couldn't write a huge review on a poem- seems more like a story thing. The next chapter of GDM, you'll get one, k?
As for what to update next, just go with your instincts. Whatever you have ideas for, that should be first on the update list.
9/12/2006 c1 59Frore
I'm sorry if I offended you with my review of "Drip Drop." Having been someone with quite a few issues with my family, I'm glad that writing has proven itself as an outlet. Keep at it.
59FroreI'm sorry if I offended you with my review of "Drip Drop." Having been someone with quite a few issues with my family, I'm glad that writing has proven itself as an outlet. Keep at it.
9/10/2006 c1 12Stormie Greye
A bit too repetitive in my opinion, but it also made the message more dark and chilling as well. So I believe it balances out.
12Stormie GreyeA bit too repetitive in my opinion, but it also made the message more dark and chilling as well. So I believe it balances out.
9/6/2006 c1 37TaltushMeiMei
Oh, my... Somebody wasn't too happy. =) I've got to say, though, loving the style. Nice short one word sentences, then a series of longer ones... It's cool.
37TaltushMeiMeiOh, my... Somebody wasn't too happy. =) I've got to say, though, loving the style. Nice short one word sentences, then a series of longer ones... It's cool.
9/6/2006 c1 243ShadowFane
I'll say. Wow. This was...dark...eh, but we all have days like that. I liked it, even in it's darkness. Good work.
SF
243ShadowFaneI'll say. Wow. This was...dark...eh, but we all have days like that. I liked it, even in it's darkness. Good work.
SF