10/10/2006 c1 Octello
Wonderful! The emotion and detail had me captivated to the very end. I wish that I had the ability to breath fire...

I'm so sad that my favorites are maxed, or I would tottaly add this.

9/12/2006 c1 Darket
What's happened again? Damn, I must see more, this story is interesting. Nice read, I like it. I say that there are no problems with it, the grammar is done well. My opnly problem was that it took until the black dude's appearance to tell that the main character is a girl.

Peace

Darket

9/6/2006 c1 7firesword
this the story you told me about dide, i hm, weird thats all i have to say.

pugnacious, been studying your vocab there haven't you?

Different and strange, yet it has to do with someone dieing sounds like your average Cheeseraptor story.