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1/28/2009 c1 2poppiesinoctober
Wow. I really like this.

I really would love to see more of this.

But, um, seeing how it's been a while since you updated, I don't know.

But, if you every do, I will definitely read this!

It's really interesting.

-Rachel
12/21/2008 c1 5Camelia Sinensis
This was funny and sexy (dunno how you did that, though) and really smooth.

It was like a James Bond novel, except he ain't an agent. ;) I just loved it to bits!

"It was just business." Brilliant.

I really hope there's more, it'd be a shame if we didn't get to see more of Jay.
12/8/2008 c1 1Xanthe P
Wow. This reminds me of the newspaper article I once read on guys who supported their families and owned bungalow houses just by snatching women's handbags off them in the street.
3/23/2008 c1 chocolatechipash
haha i like, hope you continue this sounds like it has some great potential.
9/17/2007 c3 Proven.Guilty
Aww poor kid, doesn't know what he got himself into ^^

love your story
9/11/2007 c3 3emotionless-stares
aww...poor SCott...I hope you update soon!
9/11/2007 c2 emotionless-stares
o0o, she knows where they live
9/11/2007 c1 emotionless-stares
Rude guy..it'd be funny if they met again
8/11/2007 c3 atreyu love
haha. amazingly funny :)
5/29/2007 c3 7CallMeCute
aw this is really good! i look forward to the rest.
5/7/2007 c1 8bulletproof.cupid
haha and here i was thinking he pulled out a vibrator or some shit...
4/14/2007 c3 18newfoundhope
Waiting for you to finish this story. Practicing my patience. :]
4/6/2007 c3 Naru
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THAT is a flower. And its for this chapter. and you.
3/26/2007 c3 19lastchance02
Great story. I really wish you'd continue it. The characters are already fascinating and I'm dying to hear their history.
3/23/2007 c3 Charity F
Heya!

It’s weird that I never get around to reading during school, but then when it’s close to exams, suddenly I have all the time in the world (not) to read. It’s like, I’m looking for a distraction or something. Ptsh. Anyway.

You’re style of writing here is addictive, so good. Gah, I love it! =) And the plot just keeps on moving, like, you’ve got the reader interested into the life of Charlie and Jay. And it is pretty interesting, even though Charlie doesn’t really seem to think so.

Anyway, I feel pity for this Scott guy. He sounds so scared.

Keep up the great work!

~Tabitha
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