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10/27/2006 c9 2EnderWinner
I'm not sure whether to be horrified or intrigued! Good writing, but my... Write more soon!
10/17/2006 c4 Iren Masot
B-A-C-K-S-T-O-R-Y

Say it with me...B-A-C-K-S-T-O-R-Y...

maybe a chapter for Okin would be appropriate, where the reader knows why he's patrolling the middle of nowhere...
10/17/2006 c1 Iren Masot
*fists in face*

I did it right away instead of at the end...are you happy now?

^_^

*huggle*

Just kidding. You rock! You actually submitted something!

Me, I've been of for...5 years now? Hmm... anyways, all you need to do is put your story up there and go read around a little yourself. Reading other people's stories will help to improve your own.
10/8/2006 c6 1Mr.Moran
nice it keeps getting better looking forward to more and by the way i compleatly understood the ships description though somtimes i think i speak english bader than most...great job though
10/3/2006 c5 Mr.Moran
you did fine it was great adn fun to read. watching out for more, and thanks for the comment.
9/22/2006 c2 Mandalore
I had a similar story a while back (that was never published) but you appear to have done something better with it. Please contact me over e-mail.
9/14/2006 c3 Dustin
It was cool, and it does a nice job of forshadowing to the next chapeter. Well good luck on the rest of the chapters looking forward for more.-Dustin
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