for Nothing More, Nothing Less4/8/2007 c1 
44Stormer
This is truly gorgeous, in a depressing kind of way. In spite of the two typos I picked up on, I think you're a really good poet!
44StormerThis is truly gorgeous, in a depressing kind of way. In spite of the two typos I picked up on, I think you're a really good poet!
9/12/2006 c1 13Pyreflei
Again you sound sad. I can't decide if this is just a passing muse or if it's something deeper and altogether more dangerous. It is a beautiful poem, though. You truly have the gift of the pen.
~Ciao, Ayaerhis
13PyrefleiAgain you sound sad. I can't decide if this is just a passing muse or if it's something deeper and altogether more dangerous. It is a beautiful poem, though. You truly have the gift of the pen.
~Ciao, Ayaerhis
9/9/2006 c1 Mortuus Dilectio
The way you convey your emotions into words is beautiful. This poem is beautiful. Keep writing.
The way you convey your emotions into words is beautiful. This poem is beautiful. Keep writing.