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10/7/2006 c1 65Hitsumei
I truly like this poem. Though it's short, it's full of emotion. The only suggestion I have is to fix the punctuation after the word "fall," as its current punctuation disturbs the flow of the poem.
9/9/2006 c1 9Coloured Raindrops
Oh gosh. That was beautiful.

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