
10/18/2006 c1
612simpleplan13
I like the whole play on the stars controlling your fate... interesting ending...

I like the whole play on the stars controlling your fate... interesting ending...
9/23/2006 c1
8laundryshapedsouls
This seems slightly journalistic but its beautiful:). everything's right there.

This seems slightly journalistic but its beautiful:). everything's right there.
9/12/2006 c1
25cornered.sensations
bittersweet, lovely work, I love how you left the answer for the reader to answer. Great work

bittersweet, lovely work, I love how you left the answer for the reader to answer. Great work
9/11/2006 c1
63lackluster
vague and evidently personal, yet the refernce of the cosmos feels neverending.

vague and evidently personal, yet the refernce of the cosmos feels neverending.
9/10/2006 c1
70mercury.love
Maybe I'm biased because I love everything about stars, but I really liked this. It felt really personal. Like it just captured a moment. If that makes sense. Short and simple, but you got everything across perfectly. Good writing, keep it up.

Maybe I'm biased because I love everything about stars, but I really liked this. It felt really personal. Like it just captured a moment. If that makes sense. Short and simple, but you got everything across perfectly. Good writing, keep it up.