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9/23/2006 c1 56felicia13
Not at all what I was expecting. Fun nonetheless, but not what I was expecting.

From glancing, you seem to like love as a topic. I'm not saying anything, but love is perhaps one of the over-used topics. I, personally, like to use it, but it can get a tad overdone. My teacher doesn't let us write about love or suicide. He's got a good point.

I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just saying. You wanted critisms, right?

For whatever reason, I don't like the line breaks in this poem. Maybe it's because I read and write poems with seemingly random line breaks, but I don't like this. *shrugs* To each is own, right?

Keep on writing, because talent doesn't deserve to be wasted and I think you have some. Some good quality talent ...

Felicia.

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