for Liquid Sunshine9/13/2006 c1 frayedlifeforce
now, this is just beautiful. it has amazing imagery as the other reviewer mentioned, but i love it so much. the idea of liquid sunshine was just so beautiful, i loved this so much!the last part finished it up well too - excellent. just one tip - it's not 'dieing' but 'dying'.
now, this is just beautiful. it has amazing imagery as the other reviewer mentioned, but i love it so much. the idea of liquid sunshine was just so beautiful, i loved this so much!the last part finished it up well too - excellent. just one tip - it's not 'dieing' but 'dying'.
9/11/2006 c1 bread and circuses
Brilliant imagery! I love the lines you used in the summary - the repetition was really effective. That whole verse was beautiful - 'burning holes in the ocean' is probably my favourite line. It's such a pretty song. Awesome work!
Brilliant imagery! I love the lines you used in the summary - the repetition was really effective. That whole verse was beautiful - 'burning holes in the ocean' is probably my favourite line. It's such a pretty song. Awesome work!