for Everything To Lose10/25/2011 c10 HarderToBreathe
Yay! I'm so happy you posted this chapter. I'm a little surprised that Ben spilled the beans but at the back of my mind that's expected out of Ben, he really likes Goldie. Great chapter! I hope to see another post soon please please please! :D Keep on writing!
Yay! I'm so happy you posted this chapter. I'm a little surprised that Ben spilled the beans but at the back of my mind that's expected out of Ben, he really likes Goldie. Great chapter! I hope to see another post soon please please please! :D Keep on writing!
10/24/2011 c10 Angelmom
I'm reading it. Hurry and finish please
I'm reading it. Hurry and finish please
10/24/2011 c10 
2springdaisy
I'm still reading it! haha. Please do finish it, regardless of how long it'll take you! I would really like to see how the story progresses, so far I think you're doing a great job of building up Maddie's character, and her interaction with Ben. Keep it up :)
2springdaisyI'm still reading it! haha. Please do finish it, regardless of how long it'll take you! I would really like to see how the story progresses, so far I think you're doing a great job of building up Maddie's character, and her interaction with Ben. Keep it up :)
10/23/2011 c10 4Lindsay Marie
Hi there! I'm still reading, which is kind of amazing since this is the only thing I'm still reading on fictionpress. Kind of outgrew it. It just shows how good your story is! Anyway, the sexual tension in this chapter was seriously palpable. Good job! I hope to see more!
4Lindsay MarieHi there! I'm still reading, which is kind of amazing since this is the only thing I'm still reading on fictionpress. Kind of outgrew it. It just shows how good your story is! Anyway, the sexual tension in this chapter was seriously palpable. Good job! I hope to see more!
10/23/2011 c10 12Kellet
I actually love Ben in this chapter. Really. At first, I just thought he was an obnoxious tool who couldn't get any girl in bed without coercion, but there was that chapter where Maddie says he confessed that he couldn't get her out of his head (which totally strummed on my heartstrings). Then he does something completely asshole-like, like scoping for platform stuff and, ugh. He's infuriating.
Obviously Maddie has her flaws, and she by no means is of exemplary character. I mean, seriously? Fucking some guy to forget someone else? That's awful. But Ben is so much worse 'cause he acted like that right from the get-go, whereas she did 'cause I think she sort of knew Ben could take it (the rejection, I mean).
What I'm trying to say is, I hate Ben. He sucks. He's so real and human and he's so not above pettiness. But it's also obvious he's into Maddie and loves playing her because she reacts so well and just, yeah. Their chemistry is amazing.
12KelletI actually love Ben in this chapter. Really. At first, I just thought he was an obnoxious tool who couldn't get any girl in bed without coercion, but there was that chapter where Maddie says he confessed that he couldn't get her out of his head (which totally strummed on my heartstrings). Then he does something completely asshole-like, like scoping for platform stuff and, ugh. He's infuriating.
Obviously Maddie has her flaws, and she by no means is of exemplary character. I mean, seriously? Fucking some guy to forget someone else? That's awful. But Ben is so much worse 'cause he acted like that right from the get-go, whereas she did 'cause I think she sort of knew Ben could take it (the rejection, I mean).
What I'm trying to say is, I hate Ben. He sucks. He's so real and human and he's so not above pettiness. But it's also obvious he's into Maddie and loves playing her because she reacts so well and just, yeah. Their chemistry is amazing.
7/28/2011 c9 HarderToBreathe
Please please please UPDATE SOON! Goldie and Ben are soooooo into each other. Maddie's just doesn't realize it yet. And I love how even after all what Maddie did to Ben, he didn't go to bed with Soo Min. :) MORE MORE MORE! PLease! :DDD
Please please please UPDATE SOON! Goldie and Ben are soooooo into each other. Maddie's just doesn't realize it yet. And I love how even after all what Maddie did to Ben, he didn't go to bed with Soo Min. :) MORE MORE MORE! PLease! :DDD
7/28/2011 c9 leavemeialone
I really do hope that you update. I do love this plot, I do understand it is a little cliche but still it occurs pretty often in people's lives. People have a one night stand and sometimes it ends up being more. In this case, I do like how it is being more. I know it is hard to stop pining over your best friend, but Ben sounds really hot. He likes her. I really have enjoyed it this far.
I really do hope that you update. I do love this plot, I do understand it is a little cliche but still it occurs pretty often in people's lives. People have a one night stand and sometimes it ends up being more. In this case, I do like how it is being more. I know it is hard to stop pining over your best friend, but Ben sounds really hot. He likes her. I really have enjoyed it this far.
5/13/2011 c9 strangledice
Great story!Nice job!
Please continue..
Great story!Nice job!
Please continue..
12/31/2010 c9 blithe.serendipity
I like the idea. Good writing as usual. I just hope you decide to update soon :) please. I'll be waiting to read it.
I like the idea. Good writing as usual. I just hope you decide to update soon :) please. I'll be waiting to read it.
12/23/2010 c9 pterodactylion
I HAVE FAITH THAT YOU'LL ONE DAY POP OUT, OUT-OF-THE-BLUE AND BE ALL LIKE:
I'm so sorry that this took so long, guys...
AND THE REST OF THE WORLD WILL BE LIKE "THANK GOD"
I can't live without hearing the end of this story ): PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ;)
The story is really good (:
And it's nearly 2011. So. New Years' present to your readers? Please? :D
I HAVE FAITH THAT YOU'LL ONE DAY POP OUT, OUT-OF-THE-BLUE AND BE ALL LIKE:
I'm so sorry that this took so long, guys...
AND THE REST OF THE WORLD WILL BE LIKE "THANK GOD"
I can't live without hearing the end of this story ): PLEASE PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ;)
The story is really good (:
And it's nearly 2011. So. New Years' present to your readers? Please? :D
9/18/2010 c9 A. Akira
Thank you for updating. I've always enjoyed this story and the tension between Maddie and Ben. Good luck with the writer's block - you're last update gives me hope for more!
Thank you for updating. I've always enjoyed this story and the tension between Maddie and Ben. Good luck with the writer's block - you're last update gives me hope for more!