for Love is in the Air6/18/2007 c1 
6MizSphinx
so i noticed the last time u updated was the 14 of sept of '06...which was the first chapter anyway and now it's like June of '07 and i'm wondering this one thing...WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED? lol that cliffie was placed so neatly...i was so into the story and i still am. I hope you'll continue it...soon...
-MizSphinx
6MizSphinxso i noticed the last time u updated was the 14 of sept of '06...which was the first chapter anyway and now it's like June of '07 and i'm wondering this one thing...WHY HAVEN'T YOU UPDATED? lol that cliffie was placed so neatly...i was so into the story and i still am. I hope you'll continue it...soon...
-MizSphinx
4/9/2007 c1 14its.Nothing.Special
If you ever plan on continuing this...then...well...you better! You can't leave me hanging like that, darn it! :P
This seemed..deep. :) I really like your writing style, and the way you spread out dialogue. It's really cool.
Please keep writing!
;)becky
14its.Nothing.SpecialIf you ever plan on continuing this...then...well...you better! You can't leave me hanging like that, darn it! :P
This seemed..deep. :) I really like your writing style, and the way you spread out dialogue. It's really cool.
Please keep writing!
;)becky
2/8/2007 c1 1Tatiana Moore
Wow... it was funny/sad when she told the story behind her name-her dad being too tired and was writing the name of his first child... wow... lol.
I'm curious to know exactly when this story is taking place... you mention that her sister could have been from a earlier century which makes me believe it's present time, but it still may be good to mention that.
"So now the whole match was looking like the tethering of a small poodle to a fire-breathing dragon"... this line is very good. You're a great writer and it shows through lines like these and others... kudos you. I really enjoyed this chapter...
1Tatiana MooreWow... it was funny/sad when she told the story behind her name-her dad being too tired and was writing the name of his first child... wow... lol.
I'm curious to know exactly when this story is taking place... you mention that her sister could have been from a earlier century which makes me believe it's present time, but it still may be good to mention that.
"So now the whole match was looking like the tethering of a small poodle to a fire-breathing dragon"... this line is very good. You're a great writer and it shows through lines like these and others... kudos you. I really enjoyed this chapter...
1/25/2007 c1 12elisefey
Okay, serious cliffhanger of a last line there! Just when the whole thing is starting to pick up speed you stop with that line! Rather evil of you. Don't stop there, keep writing!
12elisefeyOkay, serious cliffhanger of a last line there! Just when the whole thing is starting to pick up speed you stop with that line! Rather evil of you. Don't stop there, keep writing!
12/21/2006 c1 1turqoiseinstant
i'm struggling to see the point of this piece. granted, it is one o'clock in the morning and my brain is not functioning well, but i am slightly befuddled. (i just wanted to use that word)i liked the ending, it does provoke thought...but do enlighten.
1turqoiseinstanti'm struggling to see the point of this piece. granted, it is one o'clock in the morning and my brain is not functioning well, but i am slightly befuddled. (i just wanted to use that word)i liked the ending, it does provoke thought...but do enlighten.