for How dare you10/1/2007 c1 
24The FiboNACHI Sequence
*winces*
This one still hurts to read.
The poem is raw with hurt and anger. While the words aren't as sophisticated as some of your other poems, the feeling is very very real. It's like there's nothing between your heart and the words, no revision, no censure no 'oh-that-might-not-be-a-good-thing-to-say'
It hits like a punch to the stomach. A good punch.
The person who did this was a complete idiot.
And I have one more to read... off this account *evil laughs*.
Ciao
Nach
24The FiboNACHI Sequence*winces*
This one still hurts to read.
The poem is raw with hurt and anger. While the words aren't as sophisticated as some of your other poems, the feeling is very very real. It's like there's nothing between your heart and the words, no revision, no censure no 'oh-that-might-not-be-a-good-thing-to-say'
It hits like a punch to the stomach. A good punch.
The person who did this was a complete idiot.
And I have one more to read... off this account *evil laughs*.
Ciao
Nach
7/3/2007 c1 56Sanseui-kitty
I'm speechless. This hit me deeply. It's powerful, truly amazing. It's almost as if i can feel the emotions pour out of it. As if i'm feeling them. bravo
56Sanseui-kittyI'm speechless. This hit me deeply. It's powerful, truly amazing. It's almost as if i can feel the emotions pour out of it. As if i'm feeling them. bravo
6/21/2007 c1 5Leighton Carrington
it's pretty good. Sometimes poetry is more about the feelings in each word than the rhythm or rhyme of it, or even the flow. I could sense the feeling in these words. and the poem even remained concise, even despite it's length. its good. good read.
5Leighton Carringtonit's pretty good. Sometimes poetry is more about the feelings in each word than the rhythm or rhyme of it, or even the flow. I could sense the feeling in these words. and the poem even remained concise, even despite it's length. its good. good read.
5/18/2007 c1 47Eve Amare
Well done.
More words I cannot say, for my heart sees itself -in a small way- in your own and therefore I cannot open up to this.
But good.
I like it.
It makes me . . . feel.
As Always,
Closed off Eve
47Eve AmareWell done.
More words I cannot say, for my heart sees itself -in a small way- in your own and therefore I cannot open up to this.
But good.
I like it.
It makes me . . . feel.
As Always,
Closed off Eve
1/17/2007 c1 32fharfalla
darn it to hell.. this is good! just the title of it strucked me.. very gud poem!
32fharfalladarn it to hell.. this is good! just the title of it strucked me.. very gud poem!
9/23/2006 c1 41sarah1491
Very emotional.. It is very.. well, I hope it's not about anyone because it sounds cruel, haha -kind of "emo" aswell as the beginning.. Sorry, nothing personal but emo poems disturb me. This one didn't though. (not too much, lol) Nice work!
41sarah1491Very emotional.. It is very.. well, I hope it's not about anyone because it sounds cruel, haha -kind of "emo" aswell as the beginning.. Sorry, nothing personal but emo poems disturb me. This one didn't though. (not too much, lol) Nice work!
9/20/2006 c1 41Neurotic Consciousness
Hmm, so this is a "crappy poem"? Could've fooled me. It's pretty good, rife with angst emotions, without being completely pretencious and just plain ridiculous. It flows well... So, I'd say you're your own toughest critic, if you think this is crap... Good job. Oh, and thanks for the review... It's my first in weeks!
41Neurotic ConsciousnessHmm, so this is a "crappy poem"? Could've fooled me. It's pretty good, rife with angst emotions, without being completely pretencious and just plain ridiculous. It flows well... So, I'd say you're your own toughest critic, if you think this is crap... Good job. Oh, and thanks for the review... It's my first in weeks!
9/18/2006 c1 1Mizz - ASSome - KiTtY
wow, i like suck a poetry lol. Anyways thankx for reviewing, your my first review in like a year! :)
chow
1Mizz - ASSome - KiTtYwow, i like suck a poetry lol. Anyways thankx for reviewing, your my first review in like a year! :)
chow
9/16/2006 c1 130Kavita Najim
Oh My! This is Amazing! I know that feeling so well!
Thank you for the review!
Peace, Jessi
P.S. =)
130Kavita NajimOh My! This is Amazing! I know that feeling so well!
Thank you for the review!
Peace, Jessi
P.S. =)
9/16/2006 c1 20Ode to Maddness
owch,this is a painfull poem, about something i'd rather not get involved in. BUT i will say one thing, if you 2 start hateing each other, i will not refain form saying "i told you so" no, kidding, seriously, don't give up on the friendship that has lasted for so many years.
Cheers,
OdeToMaddness
20Ode to Maddnessowch,this is a painfull poem, about something i'd rather not get involved in. BUT i will say one thing, if you 2 start hateing each other, i will not refain form saying "i told you so" no, kidding, seriously, don't give up on the friendship that has lasted for so many years.
Cheers,
OdeToMaddness
9/15/2006 c1 31Holly Rose E
m... i'm surprised by how strongly i can relate and know others who have played that treacherous game. of all you do is help the other and when finally they leave you bleeding and brokenhearted and then you finally get over them... that is when they want you back. when you don't want them. man. true dat, true dat. good job on this, the emotion was vivid.
31Holly Rose Em... i'm surprised by how strongly i can relate and know others who have played that treacherous game. of all you do is help the other and when finally they leave you bleeding and brokenhearted and then you finally get over them... that is when they want you back. when you don't want them. man. true dat, true dat. good job on this, the emotion was vivid.
9/15/2006 c1 unspecified
it is not crappy. nothing is "crappy" if you use such strong emotions..great job
it is not crappy. nothing is "crappy" if you use such strong emotions..great job