
9/15/2006 c1
73L. Wojcik
That's very... wow. It has a very nice, sturdy flow and the words work well. I particularly like how the whole thing sort of worked towards the end... which, by the way, was awesome. Just left me speechless really, at the weight of the last few lines. Great job, overall. ^-^
L. Kantenseter

That's very... wow. It has a very nice, sturdy flow and the words work well. I particularly like how the whole thing sort of worked towards the end... which, by the way, was awesome. Just left me speechless really, at the weight of the last few lines. Great job, overall. ^-^
L. Kantenseter