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10/10/2006 c1 19phantom-jedi
Interesting POV here. I'm afraid I haven't much else to say, seeing as I usually offer critism and rarely unadulterated praise. It captures your thought nicely without any jarring errors or syllable problems. Nice job!

phantom_jedi
9/27/2006 c1 4criceto-verde
hey!

interesting poem...I liked the idea of being an audience to street lamps...very cool.

Sillygoose
9/17/2006 c1 26braindead1345
i cant ryme atall,and this thing i dunno i love the beginning for some reason...
9/17/2006 c1 96Pandakun84
Cool. I reall like this. Great job!
9/17/2006 c1 2JJJRRR
My compliments! This piece is a simple, well-rhymed poem that communicates its point with striking clarity yet leaves substancial room for interpretation. Good work!
9/17/2006 c1 hey maria
I like the sort of haphazard rhyme that goes through this; great job.

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