for Maybe You Were the One6/3/2009 c1 Rowena
Of course i had to come read the one thing you still had posted, and it was amazing. :) so so good. -rowena
Of course i had to come read the one thing you still had posted, and it was amazing. :) so so good. -rowena
5/9/2009 c1 chocolateandbananas
yup. the story was good, even though it was a bit cliche and stuff. i mean, the part where the popular guy falls in love with the isolated girl.
and the dying-because-of-a-car-crash part.
but it was still very well-written, i think :)
anyway, it was a nice story :]
yup. the story was good, even though it was a bit cliche and stuff. i mean, the part where the popular guy falls in love with the isolated girl.
and the dying-because-of-a-car-crash part.
but it was still very well-written, i think :)
anyway, it was a nice story :]
3/22/2009 c1 ess3sandra
JESUS, that was really sad, sucks to be him. when they finally meet she dies. damn.
JESUS, that was really sad, sucks to be him. when they finally meet she dies. damn.
3/2/2009 c1 lets imagine that
Aw, poor Shane :( She never got to hear him say that he loves her.
Again, I read this way after you posted so... yeah. Now I'm gonna go read more of your stories =]
Aw, poor Shane :( She never got to hear him say that he loves her.
Again, I read this way after you posted so... yeah. Now I'm gonna go read more of your stories =]
1/27/2009 c1 thecakethief
: O
If he had just... called out to her, came up to her, tripped over her, spilled coffee on her... if he had done SOMETHING, than she would be alive. Oh my god.
Sad.
: O
If he had just... called out to her, came up to her, tripped over her, spilled coffee on her... if he had done SOMETHING, than she would be alive. Oh my god.
Sad.
12/6/2008 c1 
1Hateful Loving
WOW!...that was amazing! soo sadd that she had to die and they couldnt know of their love for each other bt amazing writing and amazing one shot! I loved it! Cant wait to read more of your writings! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
1Hateful LovingWOW!...that was amazing! soo sadd that she had to die and they couldnt know of their love for each other bt amazing writing and amazing one shot! I loved it! Cant wait to read more of your writings! :D
HaTeFuL LoViNg
8/17/2008 c1 2righthere431
=00 i cant believe it! =/ just as when they see each other again she dies... great!
but this story is really good =]
2righthere431=00 i cant believe it! =/ just as when they see each other again she dies... great!
but this story is really good =]
6/13/2008 c1 airen
what a super sad story... It's so nice even if the ending was so sad... Still love it..
what a super sad story... It's so nice even if the ending was so sad... Still love it..
5/14/2008 c1 centenarian
So sad...you like killing your characters don't you? Oh well, I guess it's just the price he had to pay. Nicely written. Good job.
So sad...you like killing your characters don't you? Oh well, I guess it's just the price he had to pay. Nicely written. Good job.
4/12/2008 c1 4audioboxer
Aww, bloody hell, that just tore me up =( It's wrong, wrong, wrong for her to die! :D I still love this, mainly because it's awesome the way that they don't have a happy ending. Too many stories do and too little people do...
...I'm SUCH a sadist.
4audioboxerAww, bloody hell, that just tore me up =( It's wrong, wrong, wrong for her to die! :D I still love this, mainly because it's awesome the way that they don't have a happy ending. Too many stories do and too little people do...
...I'm SUCH a sadist.
3/31/2008 c1 10AfterPartyFiasco
FUCK.
:((
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Oh, man. Such a sweet depressing story! :p So much emotion...I loved it! =D
10AfterPartyFiascoFUCK.
:((
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Oh, man. Such a sweet depressing story! :p So much emotion...I loved it! =D