for MasterCard Theory9/30/2013 c8 werciaforever13
Connor was sooo sweet throughout this whole chapter... except the end... I wanna see more of that ;) Great chapter! Update soon! :D
Connor was sooo sweet throughout this whole chapter... except the end... I wanna see more of that ;) Great chapter! Update soon! :D
9/29/2013 c8 the.closet.writer
I really love this chapter! I don't know why but sometimes I get so frustrated with Conner and I feel really sorry for Alex, I mean, it's her birthday why did Conner have to hold himself back like that? I just want them together A.S.A.P without the fake relationship hanging in between them :( . Anyways, well done on this chapter! ;)
I really love this chapter! I don't know why but sometimes I get so frustrated with Conner and I feel really sorry for Alex, I mean, it's her birthday why did Conner have to hold himself back like that? I just want them together A.S.A.P without the fake relationship hanging in between them :( . Anyways, well done on this chapter! ;)
9/28/2013 c8 Stunnamac
Conner, Conner, Conner... He is quite somethin'. He totally likes Nat as more than a friend!
Conner, Conner, Conner... He is quite somethin'. He totally likes Nat as more than a friend!
9/28/2013 c8 foreternity
ASDFHJAK;DFKALJDSF OMG THAT WAS SO CUTEEEE AWWWWWW (: LOL. that was so sweet of conner to do that ahaha i can already see him actually falling for alex :D and that adorable moment in the car :3 although it was an awkward ending for the both of them i really hope that conner wont do something stupid and flirt with the waitress to hide his feelings for alex or something along those lines omgg :o AGH PLEASE UPDATEEE! :) oh and as usual the chapter was amazing hahah :)
ASDFHJAK;DFKALJDSF OMG THAT WAS SO CUTEEEE AWWWWWW (: LOL. that was so sweet of conner to do that ahaha i can already see him actually falling for alex :D and that adorable moment in the car :3 although it was an awkward ending for the both of them i really hope that conner wont do something stupid and flirt with the waitress to hide his feelings for alex or something along those lines omgg :o AGH PLEASE UPDATEEE! :) oh and as usual the chapter was amazing hahah :)
9/28/2013 c8 
1leavesfallingup
Is Conner playing a game by constantly keeping Alex in doubt of his true feelings? That might be a good short-term trick to gain and keep Alex's attention, but in the long run it is just cruel and manipulative. It might make for a good plotline, but in real life a person who would play with another person's feelings like that during dating will also do the same afterwards in a long-term committed relationship.
It is a type of mind-control-game that is very common in the early stages of dating-abuse and spousal abuse cases.
All of that to say that, while his gestures for her birthday were great, I hope that you don't intend to milk the whole doubt-game too long in this story. If he cares for her he needs to man-up and say so. Otherwise he needs to let her go.
1leavesfallingupIs Conner playing a game by constantly keeping Alex in doubt of his true feelings? That might be a good short-term trick to gain and keep Alex's attention, but in the long run it is just cruel and manipulative. It might make for a good plotline, but in real life a person who would play with another person's feelings like that during dating will also do the same afterwards in a long-term committed relationship.
It is a type of mind-control-game that is very common in the early stages of dating-abuse and spousal abuse cases.
All of that to say that, while his gestures for her birthday were great, I hope that you don't intend to milk the whole doubt-game too long in this story. If he cares for her he needs to man-up and say so. Otherwise he needs to let her go.
9/28/2013 c8 5WishingDreamer5
Omg, that's a pretty quick update. I'm glad you found the time to write something. But boy oh boy, you are such a pro at this. I really thought that they were going to kiss at the end. :/ Oh well, who doesn't love drama
5WishingDreamer5Omg, that's a pretty quick update. I'm glad you found the time to write something. But boy oh boy, you are such a pro at this. I really thought that they were going to kiss at the end. :/ Oh well, who doesn't love drama
9/28/2013 c8 ess3sandra
amazing! the drama! more, just more!
amazing! the drama! more, just more!
9/13/2013 c7 3claritylong
I really love it. I think you should put a chapter from conners point of view, or even a one-shot.
3claritylongI really love it. I think you should put a chapter from conners point of view, or even a one-shot.
9/8/2013 c7 5WishingDreamer5
Omg, this story is phenomenal. I'm so glad that I somehow stumbled upon it. I love everything about it so far, which...doesn't happen too often lol. Keep up the great work and update when you can. :)
5WishingDreamer5Omg, this story is phenomenal. I'm so glad that I somehow stumbled upon it. I love everything about it so far, which...doesn't happen too often lol. Keep up the great work and update when you can. :)
9/6/2013 c7 Choukou
Hmmm, filler filler. Though I do wonder why Conner hates Ben so much. My guess, he acts sweet until he gets the girl, and then treats them like crap. But it's just a hunch.
One thing: I think it would it sound smoother if you just said "limits" instead of limitations":
"I punched him in the arm and I knew I was pushing my limitations with him."
Hmmm, filler filler. Though I do wonder why Conner hates Ben so much. My guess, he acts sweet until he gets the girl, and then treats them like crap. But it's just a hunch.
One thing: I think it would it sound smoother if you just said "limits" instead of limitations":
"I punched him in the arm and I knew I was pushing my limitations with him."
9/6/2013 c7 1Ceri Anne
I just found this story today, it has two of my favourite cliché's in it, brothers best friend and fake relationship! I've loved the story so far, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm really intrigued by the fact that Blaine is obviously rooting for the two of them to get together.
I just thought I'd point out though that in chapters 2 and 3 Anderson's name changes from Chase to Luke. (At least I think it was Anderson...)
1Ceri AnneI just found this story today, it has two of my favourite cliché's in it, brothers best friend and fake relationship! I've loved the story so far, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm really intrigued by the fact that Blaine is obviously rooting for the two of them to get together.
I just thought I'd point out though that in chapters 2 and 3 Anderson's name changes from Chase to Luke. (At least I think it was Anderson...)