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Toxic...
Toxic...
7/13/2007 c1 
69this is britt
I have no knowledge of French, and have been thinking about teaching myself some, and this convinced me of that. so harrowingly beautiful- wow. the more and more I read it. brilliant, brilliant work.
69this is brittI have no knowledge of French, and have been thinking about teaching myself some, and this convinced me of that. so harrowingly beautiful- wow. the more and more I read it. brilliant, brilliant work.
11/14/2006 c1 the naked civil servant
something began,then
something else collapsed, and i still dream of the grandfather weeping
over his own coffin
intriguing and wonderous.
perhaps for the french, it’s lightning
that lashes sight to suns
but for that line, that line alone, you are a goddess, becasue being french, and missing france, and loving france, and everything surrealist and jean cocteau and les illumines, siecle de lumieres & my god. seriously, that is amazing and wonderful and gorgeous and... my god.
something began,then
something else collapsed, and i still dream of the grandfather weeping
over his own coffin
intriguing and wonderous.
perhaps for the french, it’s lightning
that lashes sight to suns
but for that line, that line alone, you are a goddess, becasue being french, and missing france, and loving france, and everything surrealist and jean cocteau and les illumines, siecle de lumieres & my god. seriously, that is amazing and wonderful and gorgeous and... my god.
11/11/2006 c1 91fairytale failure
This poem is so gorgeous, you make it flow in an incredible way from one line to the next. French is one of the "romance" languages so of course fits well with this poem. Definitely gonna favourite this, and keep writing more!
91fairytale failureThis poem is so gorgeous, you make it flow in an incredible way from one line to the next. French is one of the "romance" languages so of course fits well with this poem. Definitely gonna favourite this, and keep writing more!
10/6/2006 c1 emergency room romantic
i love french, it's such a beautiful language and i'm studying it right now. it works perfectly in this poem, which is incredibly powerful. i would pick out my favorite lines but it all flows so beautifully together and it's just a strong, beautiful poem. definitely a favorite - i love your writing.
i love french, it's such a beautiful language and i'm studying it right now. it works perfectly in this poem, which is incredibly powerful. i would pick out my favorite lines but it all flows so beautifully together and it's just a strong, beautiful poem. definitely a favorite - i love your writing.
9/21/2006 c1 aphonic
"and i still dream of the grandfather weeping/over his own coffin,"
"aime-moi si c’est possible."
And of course, your mention of Dali, one of my favorite painters. Je l'aime. La poesie est belle. J'aime les Francais parce que je peux le comprendre. :)
"and i still dream of the grandfather weeping/over his own coffin,"
"aime-moi si c’est possible."
And of course, your mention of Dali, one of my favorite painters. Je l'aime. La poesie est belle. J'aime les Francais parce que je peux le comprendre. :)
9/21/2006 c1 189oxytocin
This is beautiful. I love the way you voice your opinions within the poem. The french ties it together and it gives me a real feeling of nostalgia... Good job. I thought it was wonderful.
189oxytocinThis is beautiful. I love the way you voice your opinions within the poem. The french ties it together and it gives me a real feeling of nostalgia... Good job. I thought it was wonderful.
9/21/2006 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
i'm not too good in french (spent most of the one year i took doing homework for spanish the period after. ^_^*) but i thought this was wonderful- the rushed, tumbled words and the fact it has no beginning and no end. unrelated subjects threaded randomly. nice.
i'm not too good in french (spent most of the one year i took doing homework for spanish the period after. ^_^*) but i thought this was wonderful- the rushed, tumbled words and the fact it has no beginning and no end. unrelated subjects threaded randomly. nice.
9/20/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
I like the mixture of languages and the sound that emanates. Excellent how you bring in glimpses and fragments of imagery and scenes to create an overall image run, kind of stream of consciousness, bits and pieces joined, but I like that, the connections that seemingly unlike things make when they are remembered or seen together in a certain context. Very well written, though my French is rusty, it's relatable through the connections you've presented. Great write.
879Moondog DozierI like the mixture of languages and the sound that emanates. Excellent how you bring in glimpses and fragments of imagery and scenes to create an overall image run, kind of stream of consciousness, bits and pieces joined, but I like that, the connections that seemingly unlike things make when they are remembered or seen together in a certain context. Very well written, though my French is rusty, it's relatable through the connections you've presented. Great write.