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9/8/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
Very interesting piece. You take a lot of ideas that don't seem to have much to do with each other, but you tie them all together so perfectly, it just seems to fit.

I also like how you work in the dialgou. It's so natural, and it gives that part an interesting tone.
12/13/2006 c1 46asteria24
Irony is the sharpest sword.

Good poem. Made me think (which is a somewhat rare event).
10/4/2006 c1 65Aquafied
no no

this is amazingkeep it
9/25/2006 c1 adrienne
the last line was gorgeous. (:
9/23/2006 c1 68this is britt
I want to print this out and paste it on my wall. that's how much I love it.
9/23/2006 c1 valentine's disease
i love a softer world.

i love this poem.
9/22/2006 c1 115HauntedMisery
"if i'm lucky, then,only in the split inside my heart."PERFECT line, I love it
9/21/2006 c1 account not in use
hell yes it is. that first line...i don't know...there was just something in that grabbed me and wouldn't stop.
9/21/2006 c1 63lackluster
this has a lot of memories for me, even though i really never remember running with scissors when i was young. it's like walking into a coffee shop: you always feel those bittersweet nostalgic feelings tugging at you. lovely.

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