for Don't Pretend9/28/2006 c1 
41BearHeart
That is so well expressed! Excellent job. You made your point, and made your point, and made your point without feeling in the least repetitive. I can hear this being said without shouting. A quiet anger. Love it.
41BearHeartThat is so well expressed! Excellent job. You made your point, and made your point, and made your point without feeling in the least repetitive. I can hear this being said without shouting. A quiet anger. Love it.
9/21/2006 c1 4broken.sparrow
wow... powerful... loved the last part, though i can sense so much sadness, i hope you aren't feeling this bad anymore..
4broken.sparrowwow... powerful... loved the last part, though i can sense so much sadness, i hope you aren't feeling this bad anymore..