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9/22/2006 c1 41BearHeart
I think the first stanza is amazing and sets the tone for the rest. Few words - big meaning. I like this very much.
9/22/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
Nice metaphors and imagry. Write more.
9/21/2006 c1 81Princess-anna57
Simple yet effective. Fascinating. Keep it up.

~Anna~ ^_^

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