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9/22/2006
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BearHeart
I think the first stanza is amazing and sets the tone for the rest. Few words - big meaning. I like this very much.
9/22/2006
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bipedalcooney
Nice metaphors and imagry. Write more.
9/21/2006
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Princess-anna57
Simple yet effective. Fascinating. Keep it up.
~Anna~ ^_^
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