for Confessions1/21/2007 c3 
1PseudoViolinist
Wow. I love your imagery; it makes it as so that I am there. This is a great story; it really captures you and thrusts you into this world that you have woven. Please continue with your story, I want to see what comes of it. (-The Guy in the Red Suit.)
1PseudoViolinistWow. I love your imagery; it makes it as so that I am there. This is a great story; it really captures you and thrusts you into this world that you have woven. Please continue with your story, I want to see what comes of it. (-The Guy in the Red Suit.)
1/17/2007 c1 xHarm
I love the three letters, especially the vocabulary you used for them. I really do think you should make more.
I love the three letters, especially the vocabulary you used for them. I really do think you should make more.
1/16/2007 c1 2orangesherbrt16
Ryann...I'm not trying to be mean or anything but this is sounding an awful lot like Crown Duel...
~Emma
2orangesherbrt16Ryann...I'm not trying to be mean or anything but this is sounding an awful lot like Crown Duel...
~Emma
12/24/2006 c1 3Mallori Doe
I still think this mysterious man is a certain violinist (don't want to make him sond gay and call him a flautist now do we) we know. yes, now that you mention it, he does remind me of peakock.
3Mallori DoeI still think this mysterious man is a certain violinist (don't want to make him sond gay and call him a flautist now do we) we know. yes, now that you mention it, he does remind me of peakock.
9/24/2006 c2 19phantom-jedi
The format is a good one, but some kind of prologue will help keep the readers from getting lost. Where is the story going? A little background on who the person is that is loved and the one in love would be most helpful.Your style is good; very descriptive and rich.
phantom_jedi
19phantom-jediThe format is a good one, but some kind of prologue will help keep the readers from getting lost. Where is the story going? A little background on who the person is that is loved and the one in love would be most helpful.Your style is good; very descriptive and rich.
phantom_jedi