
2/16/2004 c1
7water sprite
Short and to the point. I like it :) Its sad when people try and fit in with the ones that are putting them down, but it happens. Good work

Short and to the point. I like it :) Its sad when people try and fit in with the ones that are putting them down, but it happens. Good work
7/13/2001 c1
17L'acteur
The story was very short and simple, and tht's part of the appeal. I think everyone has someone in their life who they're not sure whether they should laugh at or cry about, or both.

The story was very short and simple, and tht's part of the appeal. I think everyone has someone in their life who they're not sure whether they should laugh at or cry about, or both.
3/9/2001 c1
99Little Miss Shadow
Good. Very good. Short, simple and still get's a point across. Alot of people will understand this one.

Good. Very good. Short, simple and still get's a point across. Alot of people will understand this one.
3/9/2001 c1
1Sopher Forbes
This is great. You take a small piece and charge it. This really crackles with electricity. Your characters are full and so real they are right there. Reading this I could feel Nick and his Mom right here. I could see them. Its a great piece.

This is great. You take a small piece and charge it. This really crackles with electricity. Your characters are full and so real they are right there. Reading this I could feel Nick and his Mom right here. I could see them. Its a great piece.