for Pachinko1/13/2007 c1 
2sicklysnowwhite
its going to take a while for him to come back to america isnt it? going to have to skip a couple generations. this is sadly true. but very. very sadly true. makes you sad when you see things that you do your self, huh.
2sicklysnowwhiteits going to take a while for him to come back to america isnt it? going to have to skip a couple generations. this is sadly true. but very. very sadly true. makes you sad when you see things that you do your self, huh.
9/30/2006 c1 Keito123
well, i thought it was awesome!
well, i thought it was awesome!
9/26/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Hmm... just to let you know, mothers in other parts of the world that get abortions can almost die when they do it. At least in America, they will live. Other than that stupid part, it's a pretty good poem.
Hmm... just to let you know, mothers in other parts of the world that get abortions can almost die when they do it. At least in America, they will live. Other than that stupid part, it's a pretty good poem.
9/24/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
An unfortunately accurate description of our country. Wonderfully written, though. Definately keep writing.
An unfortunately accurate description of our country. Wonderfully written, though. Definately keep writing.