for Sweet Memory12/10/2007 c1 
3Fan Fan
A beautiful you,
Dazzling under the moonlight glow.
I feel captured,
Hands tied in fencing my drum solo heart.
What were you thinking,
When you looked down with that smile?
How did you feel,
As I waltzed you around the grand palace floor?
Did you really know how much I meant it,
When I whispered "Sweet dreams lovely."?
12/10/07
Poem inspired by yours, thank you :)
3Fan FanA beautiful you,
Dazzling under the moonlight glow.
I feel captured,
Hands tied in fencing my drum solo heart.
What were you thinking,
When you looked down with that smile?
How did you feel,
As I waltzed you around the grand palace floor?
Did you really know how much I meant it,
When I whispered "Sweet dreams lovely."?
12/10/07
Poem inspired by yours, thank you :)
2/8/2007 c1 Louise
This poem has some really beautiful imagery. I especially like the first line and the last two of the second stanza. It gives it a very dreamlike quality which enhances the shy/romantic atmosphere of the poem. Its got quite a young feel to it, a kind of first love element. Really enjoyed reading it.
This poem has some really beautiful imagery. I especially like the first line and the last two of the second stanza. It gives it a very dreamlike quality which enhances the shy/romantic atmosphere of the poem. Its got quite a young feel to it, a kind of first love element. Really enjoyed reading it.
10/5/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Wow, a great poem, I'm happy for your sister and I hope she is very happy. If you haven't showed her this, you should.
89Lady DreamWriterWow, a great poem, I'm happy for your sister and I hope she is very happy. If you haven't showed her this, you should.
9/30/2006 c1 60Rosanna28
Beautiful Alex, just beautiful. Must've been a cool experience for your sister ^_^
Much love, Rosanna.
- how've you been babe? -
60Rosanna28Beautiful Alex, just beautiful. Must've been a cool experience for your sister ^_^
Much love, Rosanna.
- how've you been babe? -
9/25/2006 c1 arcane devices
Nice job with the imagery, and quite thematic. I hope to see you on your next update. - ADD-san
Nice job with the imagery, and quite thematic. I hope to see you on your next update. - ADD-san
9/24/2006 c1 298Moon-Chaser
This is beautifully done. I love the emotions that are in this. I could see it all happening in my head.
Keep it up.
I hope that you put more poems up soon.
298Moon-ChaserThis is beautifully done. I love the emotions that are in this. I could see it all happening in my head.
Keep it up.
I hope that you put more poems up soon.