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9/26/2009 c1 Halcyon Impulsion
This is really interesting and I love where it stops and starts. It could be polished, but every elementally important piece is already there and fab.
10/6/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
This has a marvelous scene creation and a mystical eerieness to it. I like the progression. The different stages of the scene, and the players in it. Very mysterious throughout, as it keeps the reader guessing about what is truly going on. Very well developed. I like the surreal strangeness of this. The weather and how it creates inequities in the speech and hearing is a nice touch, as it adds to the possibilities of the reader thinking is this really happenning, or is it some other realm altogether. Very well written. Marvelous scene description and buidup. Great write.
10/4/2006 c1 Ryustorm
pretty intense, i lov cats. temperamental wilful animals, one minute they are purring, then next they try to gouge your eyes out. they lov u really.

loved it!
9/25/2006 c1 17DarthKader
Truly, a master piece. TCA, you always seem to captivate my interest in new and facinating ways. You're an inspiration, even though I could never come even close to what you can do. Good luck with everything, you sure deserve it
9/25/2006 c1 2Casey Drake
...I'm confused, but this is something i can read over and over... I like it.

:) CD
9/24/2006 c1 18Sir Scott
Good story. It's amazing how much we love our pets.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~

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