for midnight1/12/2007 c1 
2sicklysnowwhite
the curses maked as wishes that we all wish.
looking out for the nightmares disguised as dreams.
theres so many quotable lines in here.
splattered on a window pane my dreams for all to see.
beautiful.
yes. yesyesyes.
2sicklysnowwhitethe curses maked as wishes that we all wish.
looking out for the nightmares disguised as dreams.
theres so many quotable lines in here.
splattered on a window pane my dreams for all to see.
beautiful.
yes. yesyesyes.
11/2/2006 c1 12Stormie Greye
Hmm, great! And I like the way you ended this piece with a question because it makes you think! Well, duh. My favorite lines were "looking out for / the nightmares / disguised as dreams," but the entire ending after that was amazing.
12Stormie GreyeHmm, great! And I like the way you ended this piece with a question because it makes you think! Well, duh. My favorite lines were "looking out for / the nightmares / disguised as dreams," but the entire ending after that was amazing.
9/27/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
AH! I loved this. I don't even know what to really say..i'm practically speechless! *haahaa, congrats! your part of a very small group thats been able to do that* And i hate those nights when all you can do is stare at the ceiling, after tossing and turning, just wondering if it was just a dream or nightmare and waiting to fnd out! Lovely job! And I loved how you ended this, with a question.."what do you see?" leaves the reader wondering! way to capture their attention! *woot woot* anyways, keep up the great work!
~britney
haha and btw..i loved your profile! It had me cracking up! :P :D
63silentscreamer07AH! I loved this. I don't even know what to really say..i'm practically speechless! *haahaa, congrats! your part of a very small group thats been able to do that* And i hate those nights when all you can do is stare at the ceiling, after tossing and turning, just wondering if it was just a dream or nightmare and waiting to fnd out! Lovely job! And I loved how you ended this, with a question.."what do you see?" leaves the reader wondering! way to capture their attention! *woot woot* anyways, keep up the great work!
~britney
haha and btw..i loved your profile! It had me cracking up! :P :D
9/26/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Good job! Your gift for writing poetry is really well revealed in this awesome poem. "Remembering to breathe." I like that line. Another great poem.
Good job! Your gift for writing poetry is really well revealed in this awesome poem. "Remembering to breathe." I like that line. Another great poem.