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1/12/2007 c1 2sicklysnowwhite
the curses maked as wishes that we all wish.

looking out for the nightmares disguised as dreams.

theres so many quotable lines in here.

splattered on a window pane my dreams for all to see.

beautiful.

yes. yesyesyes.
11/2/2006 c1 12Stormie Greye
Hmm, great! And I like the way you ended this piece with a question because it makes you think! Well, duh. My favorite lines were "looking out for / the nightmares / disguised as dreams," but the entire ending after that was amazing.
9/27/2006 c1 63silentscreamer07
AH! I loved this. I don't even know what to really say..i'm practically speechless! *haahaa, congrats! your part of a very small group thats been able to do that* And i hate those nights when all you can do is stare at the ceiling, after tossing and turning, just wondering if it was just a dream or nightmare and waiting to fnd out! Lovely job! And I loved how you ended this, with a question.."what do you see?" leaves the reader wondering! way to capture their attention! *woot woot* anyways, keep up the great work!

~britney

haha and btw..i loved your profile! It had me cracking up! :P :D
9/26/2006 c1 The Intelligent Designer
Good job! Your gift for writing poetry is really well revealed in this awesome poem. "Remembering to breathe." I like that line. Another great poem.

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