for You're gone forever4/11/2008 c1 misery sister
hmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'.
Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.
hmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'.
Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.
9/27/2006 c1 
3R. A. Faith
Wow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.
3R. A. FaithWow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.