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for You're gone forever

7/13/2011 c1 lymli
it seems a song, I like the rhyme from the starting :) sweet n heartbroken,
12/17/2010 c1 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
This was so sad :(

but it was written well
4/11/2008 c1 misery sister
hmm, this is a nice, strong poem. But maybe you should have read through this a bit more. Sometimes you miss out on the commas, and you sometimes write the words 'you're, you'll' into just 'you'.

Good poem though. It could have been stronger if all the easy mistakes could have been corrected.
10/15/2007 c1 54Artemis Anderson
This is really beautifully written d:)
9/27/2006 c1 3R. A. Faith
Wow. That girl is strong. I liked the ending. In most poems or stories or whatever, the guy would apoligize to the gal fifteen thousand times... and they'd live happily ever after. This is so much more realistic.
9/26/2006 c1 9SavannahX
Hey! I like this poem, it's really good. This is SavannahX, by the way, I just changed my username. ;) Great job put up more poems soon!

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