
10/5/2006 c1
1LadyBlackbird
Wow. I love the flow and the rhyme scheme. "Behind locked doors/lie words unsaid/promises broken/and tears unshed" That was my favorite part ^.^ The ending was sweet and a bit said and all too true. Keep writing.
x. Lady Blackbird .x

Wow. I love the flow and the rhyme scheme. "Behind locked doors/lie words unsaid/promises broken/and tears unshed" That was my favorite part ^.^ The ending was sweet and a bit said and all too true. Keep writing.
x. Lady Blackbird .x
9/29/2006 c1
1Gil 3
I love this poem! It covers everything without having to dive into every subject. It was great!

I love this poem! It covers everything without having to dive into every subject. It was great!
9/29/2006 c1
17Unique1952
This poem flows really well. I like it a lot. Behind Locked Doors, I never thought about it but you made a lot of really good points. Again, good work with this.
~*~ Lil Dreamy Eyez ~*~

This poem flows really well. I like it a lot. Behind Locked Doors, I never thought about it but you made a lot of really good points. Again, good work with this.
~*~ Lil Dreamy Eyez ~*~