for Kill Me6/12/2007 c1 
118lostandwandering
so powerful, so much emotion in the repetition and in the words. i like the line that says if you love me, kill me. keep writing
118lostandwanderingso powerful, so much emotion in the repetition and in the words. i like the line that says if you love me, kill me. keep writing
11/17/2006 c1 dimethylmercury
Wow...this a a really strong piece. The repetition of 'kill me' intensifies it. Good work(:
Wow...this a a really strong piece. The repetition of 'kill me' intensifies it. Good work(:
10/1/2006 c1 15CleoB
wow really powerful. i love the way ur straight to the point in this poem. keep writing.~akasha*
15CleoBwow really powerful. i love the way ur straight to the point in this poem. keep writing.~akasha*
9/29/2006 c1 11PocoSnow15
Falling in love is the best and worst thing that can happen to a person. Beautiful and vivid. Great job!
11PocoSnow15Falling in love is the best and worst thing that can happen to a person. Beautiful and vivid. Great job!