for Fantasy12/13/2007 c1 review
wow. its short. though not necessarily negatively so.
its actually a pretty descriptive work. well done.
wow. its short. though not necessarily negatively so.
its actually a pretty descriptive work. well done.
11/19/2006 c1 
612simpleplan13
I love the third line... "bitter fruits" is a great word choice... short adn well written
612simpleplan13I love the third line... "bitter fruits" is a great word choice... short adn well written
9/30/2006 c1 hey maria
I loved the first three lines, really loved them - they felt songlike, very poetic. The last line was a bit of a cliche, though, so I would work on that. But really, this was excellent. Keep writing.
I loved the first three lines, really loved them - they felt songlike, very poetic. The last line was a bit of a cliche, though, so I would work on that. But really, this was excellent. Keep writing.