for The Doors6/6/2007 c1 
8eldritch efflorescence
I really like this, especially the last simile. Sorry it took me so long to return the review. Again, I love this poem. Great job.
8eldritch efflorescenceI really like this, especially the last simile. Sorry it took me so long to return the review. Again, I love this poem. Great job.
9/30/2006 c1 hey maria
I like the sort of disjointed feel to the words, like the way you feel when you're in love. This is a nice poem; great job.
I like the sort of disjointed feel to the words, like the way you feel when you're in love. This is a nice poem; great job.