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5/29/2010 c1 lili999
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3/18/2008 c1 
41Erma Buckles
So sad and sweet! You should fix the grammar and spelling, because the mistakes take away from the beauty of the poem.
41Erma BucklesSo sad and sweet! You should fix the grammar and spelling, because the mistakes take away from the beauty of the poem.
1/17/2007 c1 8Double Plus Special
Very realistic. I particularly like "The doctors
and the shrinks
They say it’s a disease
That you can’t control it sometimes
Bullshit"
One thing, "Oh, its could go on forever," sounds like there's a typo in there somewhere, or something.
8Double Plus SpecialVery realistic. I particularly like "The doctors
and the shrinks
They say it’s a disease
That you can’t control it sometimes
Bullshit"
One thing, "Oh, its could go on forever," sounds like there's a typo in there somewhere, or something.
12/16/2006 c1 124Tipped
Aw... I know how this is. At such a young age, it is really hard to go through. And I think you captured that, really well. The voice had a sense of innocence to it, that gave it all the more meaning. I enjoyed this. Thank you for the review.
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124TippedAw... I know how this is. At such a young age, it is really hard to go through. And I think you captured that, really well. The voice had a sense of innocence to it, that gave it all the more meaning. I enjoyed this. Thank you for the review.
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10/4/2006 c1 10we-were-sumn-more
Oh...hiatus...thes tory behind it is so sad!i hop ethis wasnt based on actual experience..that would be horrible!great imagery, strong emotions, another great piece!haha-DEE
10we-were-sumn-moreOh...hiatus...thes tory behind it is so sad!i hop ethis wasnt based on actual experience..that would be horrible!great imagery, strong emotions, another great piece!haha-DEE
9/30/2006 c1 An-Author-At-Heart
Wow, very strong emotions, very dark. It's good how you described a situation so raw and painful in poetry. Very good.
Wow, very strong emotions, very dark. It's good how you described a situation so raw and painful in poetry. Very good.