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10/21/2006 c1 riyuu koizumi
friendship? sounds like love to me. :)
10/2/2006 c1 16brokendreams21
=) As sad as this poem was, I smiled at the prettiness. It's really sweet.

Thanks for your review on 'Swiss Army Pocketknife'. I totally appreciated it. It meant a lot to me. To clear a few things up about the plot, Jane never actually liked Daryl. She always hated him. I just wrote it so that it would be a bit stereotypical at the beginning. Sorry about the confusion and thanks again...

Wonderful poem! Awesome job.
10/1/2006 c1 5rach5678
Wow. I was brosing through poems when I came across yours. I think I can relate. I love it
10/1/2006 c1 59Frore
Cute and sad. I like how the rhyme scheme isn't very rigid in the middle of the poem, but reappears in certain verses without sounding forced.

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