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10/2/2006 c1 84DemonicDestiny
Trusting someone really is hard isn't it... Thing is that if you don't trust even one person eventually your emotions and everything will just come at you at one time. Great poem. It's got a lotta imagination in it.
10/2/2006 c1 10Rosemarine
Not the most earth-shattering poem I've ever read, but good imagery and very tangible. But in my opinion, you can't get away with a non-rhyming poem unless you have some really excellent and unique imagery.

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