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2/12/2010 c1 6A Kiss in the Dreamhouse
Wow, that was...so cool!
11/19/2009 c1 27dancingpaws
Im loving this :) Not usually the kind of thing that gets me reading but this is good (: Loving the 2 end lines. Its kinda ironic (?)

Really good :)

Abi xx
9/5/2009 c1 7Your Execution
woah i loved it.

xoxo, Ally
7/16/2009 c1 3Daisy Haus
this is one of best things I've read.amazing and kind of haunting
4/29/2009 c1 123mobman
Loved the second stanza more than the others, but its still an incredible poem throughout.

Mob
8/24/2008 c1 Angelic Hellraiser
No one's lucky in this one, huh?

I like it, naturally. :)
10/16/2007 c1 luv me like no other
disturbingly reminds me of the VTech incident. it was so sad.
8/10/2007 c1 Scorose
This is beautiful. Great work.
4/7/2007 c1 socks-lost
i like this alot. I liked the last two lines the best very well writen great job
10/9/2006 c1 64Tatsu the Blade Star
Equal parts trauma, depression, love, betrayal, and deep rooted psychological problems. Stir well for several years until you hear the shot.

Very nice.

Later...
10/3/2006 c1 la mocha
Creepy. Love it.
10/3/2006 c1 879Moondog Dozier
Very true social statement in this. The work itself is also very well developed, as it directly addresses the issue by being specific, and giving the reader images to connect to. Well written.
10/3/2006 c1 231someday-i-will
Wow, I liked this. The ending and third stanza are great.
10/2/2006 c1 185truefire
WOW. one of the best poems i've read in awhile. i like the 3rd stanza especially. good work.

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