for China Dolls, Fire Eyes and Disney Movies8/9/2011 c6 leavemeialone
Miette sounds so cool and adorable. I love her little ribbons. I love how she is perceived as a young and innocent girl. She is too cute! I also like Arsen. He is so hot and protective around her. She sounds like she can certainly change him. He is a good guy.
Miette sounds so cool and adorable. I love her little ribbons. I love how she is perceived as a young and innocent girl. She is too cute! I also like Arsen. He is so hot and protective around her. She sounds like she can certainly change him. He is a good guy.
1/4/2010 c6 
6Yoron
It's good and very readable S-muffin, but at such a furious pace. Maybe you could slow it down a little so I got time to breath?
But it comes directly from you right :)
And that's why it's so packed with action. Yeah I'm guessing here but I suspect that that is the way you write, from inspiration and your muse sweeping you away.
Remember to keep her happy, and maybe she will allow you to write some more.
6YoronIt's good and very readable S-muffin, but at such a furious pace. Maybe you could slow it down a little so I got time to breath?
But it comes directly from you right :)
And that's why it's so packed with action. Yeah I'm guessing here but I suspect that that is the way you write, from inspiration and your muse sweeping you away.
Remember to keep her happy, and maybe she will allow you to write some more.
1/4/2010 c5 Yoron
Okay, the bitter truth then. You're making her out as some sort of bimbo in this chapter, and i don't agree with that. Well, I'll keep you so don't fear, but still?
I get the feeling that you wanted to much to happen to fast?
Anyway, it's nicer when the buildup goes at a cooler pace.
Harrumph.
Okay, the bitter truth then. You're making her out as some sort of bimbo in this chapter, and i don't agree with that. Well, I'll keep you so don't fear, but still?
I get the feeling that you wanted to much to happen to fast?
Anyway, it's nicer when the buildup goes at a cooler pace.
Harrumph.
1/4/2010 c4 Yoron
Scooter?
And exactly when did that happen?
Her nicknaming him I mean?
She's faster than you then?
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A fast-moving tale this one :)
Scooter?
And exactly when did that happen?
Her nicknaming him I mean?
She's faster than you then?
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A fast-moving tale this one :)
1/4/2010 c3 Yoron
Sweet, and, yeah I have no choice here, you being on my favorite list and all, even neat.
It just flow.
Sweet, and, yeah I have no choice here, you being on my favorite list and all, even neat.
It just flow.
1/4/2010 c1 Yoron
I like you. You make me laugh, and I really appreciate that. So I'm going to add you to my Favorite Authors. So now I will have two in my personal, ah, harem? You and 'x.- Read. My. Lips -.x'
You do different types of stories but you could both learn from each other. Fuse it together and it would be incredibly good I think.
I don't have a thing to complain of here. Just keep it rolling.
I like you. You make me laugh, and I really appreciate that. So I'm going to add you to my Favorite Authors. So now I will have two in my personal, ah, harem? You and 'x.- Read. My. Lips -.x'
You do different types of stories but you could both learn from each other. Fuse it together and it would be incredibly good I think.
I don't have a thing to complain of here. Just keep it rolling.
11/10/2009 c6 1Kaija Wolf
It doesn't look like you'll ever update this, since it's been 2 years since the last update... but I like this story enough I'mma add it to my alerts, just in case...
1Kaija WolfIt doesn't look like you'll ever update this, since it's been 2 years since the last update... but I like this story enough I'mma add it to my alerts, just in case...
5/22/2009 c6 Guest
Uhmm...I'm guessing that you're not going to update anymore considering it's been like two years? I'm adding you to my alert anyways, just in case, 'cause I like this story so far and I'm hoping you'll continue with is...Have a wonderful day!
Uhmm...I'm guessing that you're not going to update anymore considering it's been like two years? I'm adding you to my alert anyways, just in case, 'cause I like this story so far and I'm hoping you'll continue with is...Have a wonderful day!
10/7/2008 c6 charm en route
Aww, this is so incredibly cute.
Although it's very sad that you haven't updated in a year.
D:
Aww, this is so incredibly cute.
Although it's very sad that you haven't updated in a year.
D:
8/3/2008 c6 3Duuude
We! That was good! I really like the characters. Although, there really needs to be some expansion on the "asshole's" life... err Arsen. xD
And and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh yeah, would you make one of her old friends come to visit her suddenly? Cause that would be cool! I think it would be since her friends are supposedly as weird as she is!
3DuuudeWe! That was good! I really like the characters. Although, there really needs to be some expansion on the "asshole's" life... err Arsen. xD
And and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh yeah, would you make one of her old friends come to visit her suddenly? Cause that would be cool! I think it would be since her friends are supposedly as weird as she is!