
12/12/2006 c1 Ajna
I really like the way you worded the very first line. The repetition is well done and I love it.
I really like the way you worded the very first line. The repetition is well done and I love it.
10/3/2006 c1
37TheDevilsAngel09
again another short piece, but yeat again it is filled with such powerful words. i like how you have writen "don't die, but for your beliefs" you have just powerful words.another excellent piece. you are an amazing writer.

again another short piece, but yeat again it is filled with such powerful words. i like how you have writen "don't die, but for your beliefs" you have just powerful words.another excellent piece. you are an amazing writer.