
12/11/2006 c1 Ajna
Ooh, I definitely like this one! It reminds me of old songs in Spanish... It's simple and melancholic and beautiful. :]
Ooh, I definitely like this one! It reminds me of old songs in Spanish... It's simple and melancholic and beautiful. :]
10/27/2006 c1
270dustytiger
so simple, but so very true, and so easy to relate to, short and sweet and packs a punch, love it (as always) thank you fore the review and thank you as alwys for sharing!

so simple, but so very true, and so easy to relate to, short and sweet and packs a punch, love it (as always) thank you fore the review and thank you as alwys for sharing!
10/3/2006 c1
81Princess-anna57
Another powerful piece, amazing. Those last two lines are excellent. Great! Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^

Another powerful piece, amazing. Those last two lines are excellent. Great! Write on!
~Anna~ ^_^
10/3/2006 c1
37TheDevilsAngel09
this is a short piece, but its still got powerful meaning and wording. this piece makes me think of my friends, but also of the people that i have had problems with in the past. i really like this piece. its intense and emotionals.excellent work.

this is a short piece, but its still got powerful meaning and wording. this piece makes me think of my friends, but also of the people that i have had problems with in the past. i really like this piece. its intense and emotionals.excellent work.