
1/22/2009 c1
4B. J. Winters
Very cute. The comma department *snicker*
The only thing I have to nitpick about was the ending. I liked that you openned and closed on the monitor (and the last line of dialogue) but it didn't seem logical that the program would continue to run via the monitor.
Nice twist on getting what you wish for. Fun read.

Very cute. The comma department *snicker*
The only thing I have to nitpick about was the ending. I liked that you openned and closed on the monitor (and the last line of dialogue) but it didn't seem logical that the program would continue to run via the monitor.
Nice twist on getting what you wish for. Fun read.
11/10/2008 c1 Renata Swift
Insanely funny! I can actually see this happening, and now, I am never going to stop using MS Word! Great job, though language could have been used a little better, and it could've been longer. I'm supposing this started as a little scene in your head or a personal experience perhaps.
Insanely funny! I can actually see this happening, and now, I am never going to stop using MS Word! Great job, though language could have been used a little better, and it could've been longer. I'm supposing this started as a little scene in your head or a personal experience perhaps.
10/31/2006 c1
24psychochick3
LOL! See, perfect example of GIGO. Whoever wrote that program should be shot. That's why you never let a machine try to fix what a fiendish mind will create.

LOL! See, perfect example of GIGO. Whoever wrote that program should be shot. That's why you never let a machine try to fix what a fiendish mind will create.
10/5/2006 c1
24innominate noun
Oh my goodness...I am never using an editing program in my life...*hugs Microsoft Word*...That scared the dickens out of me (as an aspiring writer as well), even though I laughed...-Bookerpiller

Oh my goodness...I am never using an editing program in my life...*hugs Microsoft Word*...That scared the dickens out of me (as an aspiring writer as well), even though I laughed...-Bookerpiller