for Everything In Nothing11/22/2006 c1 
44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.G
Wow, I just really really really loved this. A lot. I literally had to mute my music and read it outloud to myself to fully understand it, and I like that... most poetry these days (including my own, which I hate) is pretty easy to just read and pass over, but this one just begs for reviews, which it deserves. GREAT WORK!
44S.C.R.E.A.M.I.N.GWow, I just really really really loved this. A lot. I literally had to mute my music and read it outloud to myself to fully understand it, and I like that... most poetry these days (including my own, which I hate) is pretty easy to just read and pass over, but this one just begs for reviews, which it deserves. GREAT WORK!
10/3/2006 c1 Ace
Absolutly Amazing. The deepth behind it gives me goose bumps. It's so simple, yet so completly complex. && It makes me think a lot Definatly one of your better one's love. (:
Absolutly Amazing. The deepth behind it gives me goose bumps. It's so simple, yet so completly complex. && It makes me think a lot Definatly one of your better one's love. (:
10/3/2006 c1 Crossing the Rubicon
Again, I love the last line because it wasn't expected.
Oh, and from my experience, if you post more than one thing at once, it may be harder to get reviews.
Again, I love the last line because it wasn't expected.
Oh, and from my experience, if you post more than one thing at once, it may be harder to get reviews.
10/3/2006 c1 3Lemon Sorbet
Wow! At first it passes by in a blur but then it hits you...this is a great poem and a great length too. Love it! Lucyxx
3Lemon SorbetWow! At first it passes by in a blur but then it hits you...this is a great poem and a great length too. Love it! Lucyxx