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10/4/2006 c1 6marcelline
Thank you very much. When I let some people read it they tend to misunderstand this story. I'm glad you liked it!.
10/4/2006 c1 59Frore
Yes! This is the kind of story I look for on fictionpress.

1) Your word usage is great. It's good to see that there are still a few writers willing to branch out of the ordinary nouns and verbs.

2) The metaphors in this composition really grab your attention.

3) Your writing style in itself is very lilting and pleasant. Definitely not a "He said, she said" tale, as I call them. This wasn't a list of actions, it was a story. And it was beautifully obscure.

I'd better damn well see more from you.

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