for Binding Me11/7/2008 c1 
52bran4ever
I love to see emotion in a piece of writing, especially in poems. This certainly met that criteria! I like the way the poem flows and the imagery that is in it. Exquisite!
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Three cheers for "Binding Me"!
52bran4everI love to see emotion in a piece of writing, especially in poems. This certainly met that criteria! I like the way the poem flows and the imagery that is in it. Exquisite!
More! More! More!
Three cheers for "Binding Me"!
10/6/2006 c1 82Honor Bound
really good piece. it does seem to drag on a bit, but its nothing horrible. Liked the chinese finger trap line. good detail of emotion and metaphor. good job.
82Honor Boundreally good piece. it does seem to drag on a bit, but its nothing horrible. Liked the chinese finger trap line. good detail of emotion and metaphor. good job.
10/4/2006 c1 Universal Empire
Very deep piece! You did a nice job with this piece. I don't really know what to say, except, Simply Amazing! Thanx for your reviews and Keep Writing!
Sadistikal
Very deep piece! You did a nice job with this piece. I don't really know what to say, except, Simply Amazing! Thanx for your reviews and Keep Writing!
Sadistikal
10/4/2006 c1 86Cheesy Brussle Sprouts
Very well done, I think that this is one of your better poems - It has a cohesively compleate feel. you state the problem and you show how it needs to be fixed - the solution. but you do it in a way that makes one think and feel ( or try to feel what your conveying). Very well done indeed
Kira
86Cheesy Brussle SproutsVery well done, I think that this is one of your better poems - It has a cohesively compleate feel. you state the problem and you show how it needs to be fixed - the solution. but you do it in a way that makes one think and feel ( or try to feel what your conveying). Very well done indeed
Kira
10/4/2006 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
Wow, this is really a deep piece, and one of my favorites. It's been a while since I've heard from you, but you were right when you said that this was well worth the wait. Please post more soon and check out my work as well.
89Lady DreamWriterWow, this is really a deep piece, and one of my favorites. It's been a while since I've heard from you, but you were right when you said that this was well worth the wait. Please post more soon and check out my work as well.
10/4/2006 c1 10Rosemarine
Very Depressing. Also VERY repetitive. You could get the message across fine with half of what you wrote. But good rhythm and visual imagery
10RosemarineVery Depressing. Also VERY repetitive. You could get the message across fine with half of what you wrote. But good rhythm and visual imagery
10/4/2006 c1 71MidnightStar005
I don't know what to say about this because it is so true. I love it so much. Keep it up!
71MidnightStar005I don't know what to say about this because it is so true. I love it so much. Keep it up!